It was recess. The bell had just rang and I went to the lunch tables to eat lunch. I grabbed my lunch bag and sat down with my friends. When we sat down, I opened my lunch bag and it was empty. What a surprise! “Well, I guess I won’t have lunch today” I thought. So instead of eating lunch, I had to beg to my friends for food. I only got a little bit of food, though. When I noticed that my friends were leaving, I got a ball and started playing basketball.
Kia ora Ehren. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. Your clear and concise sentences, and your great use of punctuation really helps your writing to flow well. Keep up the excellent writing Ehren!