I was at my home in west virginia . And we have a big candy bowl in the middle of the kitchen . I really wanted a kit kat , but when I went into the kitchen to get a kit kat . And the bowl was empty. What a surprise! I’m going to figure this out, It was probably my sister she loves candy . If she did it i’m going to tell mom and dad on her . “ sis did you eat all the candy out of the candy bowl and before she could reply , I saw all the candy wrappers on her bed .
Uh oh, so it was indeed your sister who ate the sweets!
I wonder if you need the word ‘And’ at the beginning of this sentence Athena: And the bowl……. Perhaps that could have been a continuation of the previous sentence. What do you think?
Thank you for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand