Bradly ho-week 23

The red paint dripped from the ladder, just fresh. The billionaire stepped on the ladder, brave. He stepped in to the Ferrari dealer, looking for something to buy. Yesterday he had a car crash with a test subject. Today he looked for a new Ferrari. He was determined not to let this Ferrari die. He purchased the Ferrari with only coins and the Ferrari dealer said, why bro bro. He was like too bad for you. He drove out of the dealer confident. He drove so fast his paint fell off. Then he drove into pavement and sunk the Ferrari.

2 thoughts on “Bradly ho-week 23”

  1. Hello Bradley, I really like your first sentence. It is really visual. I can just imagine the paint slowly dripping down into a puddle at the bottom of the ladder. I think this billionaire should buy a bicycle instead of a Ferrari and then he might not cause so much damage. Well done.

  2. Hi Bradley,
    Well done on your entry this week. Your opening sentence really catches the reader’s attention. I’d love a new red Ferrari too! I’d drive more carefully than the character in your story!
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    Ireland

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