Today was my grandmother’s birthday. I was so excited to see her that I was jumping up and down on my seat. As I walked into her house, a sweet aroma drifted from the kitchen. Quickly, I ran over to my grandmother’s side and watched her cook. Next to her, there was a shelf filled with different colored jars. I was curious, and my eyes locked with one of the jars. It was shaped like a small bear. I picked it up and decided to smell it. I was startled and jumped back. My grandmother laughed. The vinegar is sharp!
Hi Alexandrea
I loved your writing this week, such a simple idea but you have created the image effortlessly for the reader. Your word choices were instrumental in doing this, using words such as aroma and curious for example.
Miss T team 100wc