Kyle started walking around his house. He has had his toys mysteriously stolen and he has been searching for them. One day he walks around looking for his toys as usual when he came across a door. “I wondered what was behind that door,” said Kyle. He then opened the door to find all his lost toys.
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Hello Ben, I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing made me feel sad about Kyle losing his toys. And because you wrote that they had been mysteriously stolen it made my mind get busy wondering stuff. That shows good writing – when you can make the reader wonder. Keep on writing!